I have a thirteen year old. I like to award him his privacy, and I rarely discuss my children on this blog. He missed an assignment in his Honors English class on haikus. I told my husband, and he said in honor of this day, we should only speak in haikus.
I sent him a haiku (three lines), and he replied back in haiku, of course:
The proper format
Haiku five seven five
Sorry about head
I have a headache today. But I must keep working through it.
Isn’t his haiku 5/6/5? The (1) proper (2) format (2) = 5. Haiku (2) five (1) seven (2) five (1) = 6. Sorry (2) about (2) head (1) = 5. I digress…
I find it funny Hubby is schooling me on correct haiku format. He gets irritated when I correct his grammar. How many times have I had to tell him which of these little words to use: you’re, your, their, there, and they’re? I had to look up haikus, because, God forbid he be right.And he was right. Except that in the 17th Century, many poets broke away from the 5/7/5 form and just made a haiku a three lined poem. That’s because rules are made to be broken. But my husband likes it old school apparently. Not me. My motto has always been rules were made to be broken, or at least bent. I’m sure this made me a difficult teenager.
In honor of Hubby, I’ve written a couple of haikus that follow the 5/7/5 rule and a few that don’t. Enjoy. And hopefully Son Number One will complete his work, and I won’t have to give him a consequence.
Rustling wind moves leaves. (5)
On this clear first day of Spring, (7)
cold air tells the lie. (5)
Baby feet have grown (5)
too fast. Forgotten toys put (7)
away for electronics. (7)
Sweet sorrow of love (5)
that cannot be. Replaced by (7)
longing for the past. (5)
Sweat pours down my face. (5)
Running off the blueberry donut. (8)
The price of sugar. (5)
Apparently I’m not great at these. Maybe some of you masters of haiku can put a few in the comments. I plan to write a flash fiction piece for Chuck Wendig’s blog at some point this week. I’ve been working on a novel (different from my almost completed piece), but mostly I’ve been spending time with family lately.
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